“I know that it is not true. I know that I cannot call your name, just as I know that the moment I reach out my hand toward you, I will wake up, all sweaty...I know that it is just my dream. Sherlock,You are back...”
I admire your painting skills, but stamping smoke brushes over sherlock really doesn't make it look like he's part of a dream or whatever. The effect isn't there, especially because a lot of the smoke is denser than the actual Sherlock bit.
Also.. I'm surprised that you managed to make a work of this caliber and still misspell "dream" twice in a row.. Not to be mean or anything, but it does destroy a bit of the "professionalism" that the art itself does convey.
Also, I notice Sherlock's face is far less detailed than John's. While this maybe have been justified by the fact that he is a "dream", etc., I would love to see a version in which both their faces are finished.